I need a quick beta for my spn_summergen offering. I'm looking for whatever advice can be spared; my skin is elephant-hide caliber so you won't hurt my feelings, probably even if you tried. Grammar nazis welcomed. Also, the end is a little saggy so any suggestions there are a-okay. Hell, ALL suggestions are shown much love!
Characters: Lisa, Ben, Matt, Sam, Dean, the Impala ;)
If no one has time, s'all good. I'm crunched myself, what with my much-publicized computer woes. Thanks, my supahstars! ✩